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Josh Spilker's avatar

I finished the book a week or 2 ago

The Akari - Suzanne bits seemed wholly unnecessary

Like a deflection from the main story, or maybe they shouldve been combined into one POV

The last chapter reveal felt good but perhaps stronger with bookends from Akari

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Andy A.'s avatar

thank god right? Someone is actually thinking!

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